Kuwashii Bloodline Submission

Completed or archived requests.

Moderators: Principal Author, Regional Author, Associate Author, Junior Author

Post Reply
User avatar
Zora
Posts: 119
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
Character Sheet: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Character Secrets: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4756

Image
Bloodline: Kuwashii

Backstory: There once was a family of fae hunters around present-day Kalzasi. This family prided themselves for their eyesight. They even went so far as to pick mates based on this quality. Over generations an ability began to develop that started to produce eyes that were different than other mortals. This was seen as both a blessing and a curse. These individuals were granted enhanced eyesight, however the stress necessary to awaken one’s eyes required near-death experiences.

At some point people started killing their loved ones to induce high levels of emotion stress in hopes of further activating their bloodline which led to this trait slowly dying out. This is an incredibly rare bloodline because one has to both have genetic ties to this family and must also undergo immense stress to even know they have it.

Description: Upon having a near death experience, it’s possible for the ensuing stress to awaken this bloodline. It’s common for awakenings to happen during magical initiations. This causes a person’s iris color to turn a shade of red, possibly as a result of a massive increase of blood flow to that area of the eye. In addition, a black comma shaped notch is visible near their pupil.

As the individual experiences more and more stress throughout their life, more notches are added, up to three in total. It’s possible to learn to trigger the increased blood flow on and off at will but until that point the eyes will ‘activate’ automatically under periods of stress.

Ability: The increased bloodflow grants eagle vision. This includes a variety of effects such as farsight, clarity at distance, increased ability to perceive motion, and minor telescopic ability. It is an incredibly desirable trait to have for aiming ranged weaponry and picking up on details from a distance.

Contrary to legends, gaining more notches does not actually make one’s eyes stronger. These are merely physical indications that tell how much trauma someone has gone through.
Last edited by Zora on Fri Aug 04, 2023 10:14 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 337
User avatar
Mirage
Posts: 706
Joined: Fri Jun 05, 2020 6:10 pm

Hello!

If I understand this correctly, this bloodline essentially gives its user eagle vision. So that would farsight, clarity at distance, increased ability to perceive motion and possibly some telescopic ability. Does that sound about right?
word count: 36
User avatar
Zora
Posts: 119
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
Character Sheet: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Character Secrets: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4756

Technically, it's just an increase in resolution. So if there was a scratch in the drywall that you could only see at 5 feet, this would let you see it at 20 feet.
word count: 34
User avatar
Mirage
Posts: 706
Joined: Fri Jun 05, 2020 6:10 pm

Would you like the bloodline to essentially be eagle vision like I described? It's not much different from a real world perspective but defining the traits more Clearly helps in the RP setting.
word count: 34
User avatar
Zora
Posts: 119
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
Character Sheet: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Character Secrets: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4756

oh! yeah that sounds good to me <3
word count: 8
User avatar
Mirage
Posts: 706
Joined: Fri Jun 05, 2020 6:10 pm

Go ahead and update the submission with the details of the ability and we will wrap this up :)

One last note... You mention that the Fae heritage in Kira is dominant in your CS. A bloodline awakening would technically shift that dominance toward the origin of that bloodline, in this case her human ancestry. Consider if this might affect other aspects of your PC.
word count: 64
User avatar
Zora
Posts: 119
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
Character Sheet: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Character Secrets: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4756

:o Could I just change the origin to be fae instead of human? (sorry to drag this out)

If not, would this more or less prevent Kira from altering her appearance?
word count: 30
User avatar
Mirage
Posts: 706
Joined: Fri Jun 05, 2020 6:10 pm

Sure that is fine :)
word count: 4
User avatar
Zora
Posts: 119
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
Character Sheet: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Character Secrets: https://legendofransera.com/viewtopic.php?t=4756

okay I made the edits!
word count: 5
User avatar
Mirage
Posts: 706
Joined: Fri Jun 05, 2020 6:10 pm

Approved!
word count: 1
Post Reply

Return to “Request Archive”