My Heart Is Like a Haunted House, Verse II

The sprawling underdark of Karnor.

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They had stopped to rest, again. Feia glared at her, still sore from the woman’s outburst of undying faith. The same outburst that had called the creature that was stalking them. But she didn’t need to know that bit. The woman glanced over at Feia, shoulders hunched from where she kneeled. Her hands clasped together, her mind had wandered for the better part of the rest they’d taken. She sucked in a breath, let it out on a wheeze.

“What do you believe in?”

Feia glanced at her. What use was talk about faith? It was clear on her face, even if she didn’t realize it. But the woman could recognize it. She’d seen the look so many times when she posed the question. Most used it as a means to divulge how much bad luck she seemed to carry around with her. Others offered a little insight into their being and reasoning that the woman couldn’t relate to. Others still, like Feia as she regarded the woman, held disdain.

“I believe that you’ve royally fucked us.”

She blinked. “I believe this could be a test.”

“A test of what?”

“I don’t know. One of the Lords has seen us questionable and this is just — a test of our worth.”

“You can’t mean that.”

“But I do. This is...suffering. Grief. We’ve lost and will lose.” She took in another breath, brows furrowing. “Toben, the other two — we lost them. One to sacrifice, the others to —”

“Your mistakes.” Feia stood, loomed over her. “We lost them to your mistakes.”

Though it might have been a laugh, it sounded more like a cough when it left the woman. “Not my mistakes. The workings of the gods. You might not like it, but you know it.”

“You’re a loon.”

“Am I? I didn’t put myself here by choice.”

Feia paused, regarded the woman with the same level of distaste that she had before. Maybe a little stronger. The curl of her lip as she turned away was telling. The woman was used to being blamed. Blame placed upon her had been what lead to her being here, after all. The same blame that was carried into the legionnaires and tainted the view people had of her. She coughed, nails digging into the back of her hands as she clasped her hands harder, brought them to her face as she closed her eyes.

Feia would think her crazy, a fool, but it wouldn’t change that the fact that this was a situation they had little hope of getting out of alive. The more unfamiliar a terrain, the more likely it was that they were faced with danger. Even she knew that much, she wasn’t sure she could say the same for Feia, who rested as if there were nothing that could possibly take them.

Beyond them, where they could not see, stirred the whisperings of dread.
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The thing about people thinking you were crazy was that they let their guard down around you.

Feia relaxed, in the way that a woman in a situation such as this, and didn’t pay the woman much attention. Which gave her ample opportunity to pray when she decided that the woman wasn’t worth much more of her energy. Left her room to sit and wait and watch the shadows move in the darkness. Slightly darker gray spots that shifted with her words, as if to taunt her for her faith. She ducked her head.

Not out of fear, but maybe the little bit of spite that remained in her.

It was the one prayer that she still knew well. One she recited with every moonrise and day that ended when she laid her head down on the pillow. It would likely not have the same weight as it did in its usual setting. She shut her eyes, steadied her breathing.

“Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the Hooded One my soul to keep.”

It wasn’t like she intended to sleep. Surely, the creatures would get her before then. And at that — she suspected that sleep would be far removed from her.

“If I should die before I wake, I pray Malgar my soul to take.”

She pressed her palms together tighter, nails biting into flesh with the force of her grip. Jieun’s fingers ghosted through her hair, pushed it out of her face. The last time she’d had a cut was too long ago. She used to like keeping it in check. Image was everything when you wanted to be a star. Now — she didn’t have those same thoughts. No one would care what she looked like if they ever found her corpse again.

“Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the Hooded One my soul to keep.
If I should die before I wake, I pray Malgar my soul to take.”


There was, though, one prayer she remembered. Back when she was happy. When Jieun still breathed and didn’t wander the corners of her minds. When the girl danced to her songs on the streets and not in the recesses of her mind. The woman sucked in a breath, dropped her head down. Pressed her forehead to the rocky ground of the cavernous First Deep. Left her hands over her head as if they would show more reverence. Maybe it did, prostrating herself like that.

“Hear my voice, oh Drimera, in my lamenting.
Preserve my life for fear of the enemy.”


She shuddered. It felt colder. The Warrens, at least not the First Deep, was not known for being warm and comfortable, but the drop in temperature was noticeable. Just enough that the goosebumps that rose over her skin were notable to her. Her breath misted in the air when she raised her head. Jieun returned.

The woman was a vision. The same vision she had had out in the market the first time the woman had seen her. A pout on her lips as she stooped low. We should just run.

No, she remembered this talk.

She remembered it too well.

Maybe they should have run that day. Hand in hand, and as far from the reaches of Kalsazi as they could have gone. They could have tried for Zaichaer, even. Imagined a moment of them living in the machine-work city. They’d had dreams, then. Talked about them so frequently. The woman might not have minded that she would need to forsake the gods of her family. If only for a little while, before they were walking the globe because she’d made it big. The fantasy had played out so well in her head, and she’d thought herself a genius when she’d responded to Jieun initial plea of eloping.

But then, it had hit her that she wouldn’t be able to give her lover the life she deserved. Not yet. So they plotted to steal each other away when the time was right and that had been sweeter. Childish. Foolish. One of them was dead. The woman closed her eyes, smiling spreading out over her lips. She would be soon to join the other.

But the cold persisted.

A touch to her temple forced her eyes open and it was into the abyss of a wraith’s face she looked. An empty vacant expanse loomed over her, whispering into her ears. The woman knew the stories. Knew of what the creature pressing icy fingers to her temples could do. It didn’t stop her from trembling. It didn’t stop the warmth that trickled down her leg.

Ah.

She thought she hadn’t feared death, but maybe she was wrong. Maybe it was the little voice in her head that turned into a chorus, telling her that there was never any hope. Maybe it was Jieun smiling just beyond the creature, with a look that was simple.

I told you we should have run.

Jieun had always been spiteful in a way. It was the spite of a teenage girl that didn’t like to see that she was wrong, but the woman had always seen it as something admirable. A determination to never stop. But, she hadn’t been much of a woman then, either. She hadn’t been thrown into the Warrens, then, either. Her spite had turned into a survival, even as she yearned for an end. Any end.

But not this one.

A sob tore through her throat as the creature released her, letting her drop back down. The glow of her eyes illuminated just a little beyond her lashes. It felt like Frost had hit her in the face; it hurt to move. But her lips did.

“All men will fear,
And all men will declare the working of the Hooded One,
And will understand his doing.”


This...could not be her end. She looked the creature in the maw once more, reached out for it the same way she might have reached out for her gods. If the stories were right, it would take her some time. It would take whatever was left of her to drain, and by then she might have found her way out. If it had a clear urge to inflict the pain it did, maybe it had more than that. Thought, logic.

Maybe it wanted out.

“The righteous will rejoice in Drimera and take refuge in her,
And all the upright in heart will boast.”
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Investigation: The movement of shadows might be creatures
Navigation: Using creature appearances as landmarks for how far you've gone in the Warrens
Psychology: Some people don't rely on faith
Psychology: Sometimes people feel better blaming others
Stealth: People tend to ignore you if they think you're crazy
Tactics: Timing is everything

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Injuries: N/A

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Comments: Deliciously creepy. I approve ^.^

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